Dialog and "local/specialized" language

When I worked for quite a few hours with the site, it was not giving me the dialog level I hoped for, and it was using words that were not accurate for the special location where local shipboard language is needed.

I wish you luck with this. I would suggest the most important focus should be on imaginative and realistic dialogue. Just like actors, we all find it difficult to be natural when placed in the spotlight or the rewrite!!

Arthur