This is from Margie Lawson. The EDITS system focuses on showing details and eliciting emotions from readers. Margie breaks writing down to six components: Emotion (visceral responses only) in pink, Dialogue in blue, Internalizations (including narrative, exposition, backstory, flashbacks, or narrator’s comments) in yellow, Tension and Conflict in orange, Setting and Description in green, and Nonverbal Communication (including dialogue cues, action, body language, and senses) in red. Incorporating something like this is the laser tools would be fantastic!