Writing a play

My God, your first page is so damn busy. It blows me away I can’t get through what you’re trying to tell. It’s just downright gaudy It’s like the touts of India. If someone’s on meth, it might work for them, but for the rest of us, well too much. My suggestion is that you give more space and bigger, print and make it easy to understand what it is. I am so confused looking at your opening page I just wanna have someone review my play and properly format it I don’t need creative input I just need the proper formatting. Can you do that?

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Status

Proposed

Board

💡 Feature Request

Date

1 day ago

Author

Mark Gunter

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